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Poetry (or not)

What do you think about the Sun ?
 
In my opinion
Sun is a luminescent onion
Look at him and you will cry
He disappears and you feel sad
At night he travels over seas
To wake you up with frying whistles
And when at last Sun is chewed, swallowed and no more,
New words are failed on the shore
 
(In Padls : "My worst Poetries" 1981-2007)

Posted on 11/02/2007 9:05 AM Visits: 36
lucasquebradita: 11/02/2007 10:39 AM
a mi me gusta el sol . per lo que mas me gusta son las sobras que gracias a el existen ... uno puede hacer sombras de diferentes formas : b
bonito poema
saludos
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qlaudiaq: 11/02/2007 11:45 AM
genius.


reminded of sam and how he didn't like his last name to be sung.
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Fabricio: 11/02/2007 5:01 PM
John Lennon cantando!
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